[#오늘의방탄] You’ve shown me I have reasons I should love myself💜 아미들이 만들어준 2018 MGA의 모든 순간들🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆✨ #인기상탄소년단 #아미짱짱맨뿡뿡
[#Today’sBangtan] You’ve shown me I have reasons I should love myself💜 All of the moments at the 2018 MGA’s made by ARMYs🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆✨ #PopularityAwardBoys #ARMYJjangJjangManBboongBoong
This. This is good fiction writing advice. I really appreciate how it was formatted as “this is a common problem, here is a solution to try in your own work” and not “oh god, don’t do that!” without any extra help. And I extra appreciated the “don’t rely on adverbs” bit, because they do have their place but they aren’t the only way actions can be emphasized.